My first version used a limited palatte, and while I liked it, I wanted it to have more movement and darker values. I also wanted the bird and the tree to stand out a bit more.
I tweaked colors and composition, but the result wasn't working. The foreground stands out more, but the colors look off and the window scene still feels too distant.
Finally I changed the perspective a bit, and shifted things around. I had fun with the sweeping water, too. And I arrived at the final piece!
I never put much stock in re-doing things before. But being forced through this exercise really opened my eyes to the value of making subtle tweaks and approaching the same scene from new angles. I think it was a valuable lesson!
The changes are dramatic and really bring the window scene forward. The color changes also make it more dramatic. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOh wow, beautiful! I thought the first one was great, but the revisions brought out so much more! Revisions can be a pain, but I agree that they can really make a different. Your watercolors are gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteIt's gorgeous, such a lovely sense of depth to it, a really lovely painting.
ReplyDeleteJess x
Thanks Jess! I'm glad you like it :)
DeleteGreat windows... beatiful artwork...
ReplyDeleteBest wishes from Buenos Aires...
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